Love Feels Like Freedom

Love Feels Like Freedom is an anthology of poetry by the third grade students of 457X, Sheridan Academy for Young Leaders. During the twenty days we had together, students discussed the writing of Sandra Cisneros, Walt Whitman, Aracelis Girmay, Franz Kafka, Christina Rossetti and others. Students engaged in an extensive study of the great Harlem poet, Langston Hughes.

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Students learned how to use hyperbole, metaphor, simile, alliteration, personification and to  they practiced using their imagination to enliven their writing.

This is the second year that I have worked with these creative children, and it is inspiring to see how much they remembered, and how much more they are willing to learn. We hope that each one of these young writers will continue to play with language and to explore poetry.

We are grateful to the teachers who welcomed us into their classrooms and who were active collaborators in our lessons. Whether connecting our lesson to the school curriculum, walking around helping students with their poems, or sharing poems they wrote themselves, they have added their own unique contribution to the experience.

This anthology could not have been possible without the collaboration of the teachers and aides. Thank you to Ms. Cohen, Ms. Kouakou, Ms. Pimentel, Ms. Weiner and Ms. Wright and paraprofessional, Mr. Jusino. We thank you for your enthusiasm and dedication to these young students. We are grateful to have been part of this team.

We thank Principal, Ms. Febus and Assistant Principal, Mrs. Pevey for inviting us into the school once again. Thank you for your warmth and for always making time for us when we needed help! Thank you for cherishing the arts and for your commitment to celebrating the arts in your school.

With Love, Alba Delia Hernández & Virginia Valenzuela

 

FEATURED POEM

 

Rainbow Cloud
by Ashley (3rd grade)

Love is as
Sweet
As an
Apple

Love
Is calling
Me when I
Am
Sleeping

Love
Is sweet
As
A lollipop

My heart
Is
Like an apple
Tree

My love is
A rainbow
Full
Of joy

Love is
Beautiful
As a bird

Love smells
Like
A strawberry
Perfume

My heart
Is a
Cloud
That’s called
Rainbow Cloud.



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